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Stop!
Wait a minute please!
Dont leave me standing here again.
I relive this every night.
Help me change the out come this time.
Just this once.
Look around.
Cant you see?
Im the best you ever had!
Stay with me.
Dont go!
Dont leave me standing in the pouring rain.
Help me change our fate!
Have a seat and think it through.
Over and over
It plays in my head.
I followed you outside.
I remember the rain,
The warm smell of the rain.
I remember how you love the rain,
But tonight its your enemy.
I hate knowing how this will end.
Why did you leave me?
I begged you to stay but you didnt!
You promised you would come back.
But you lied!
I heard the squealling tires,
The shattering of the glass.
I saw the steal frame cave in on top of you.
I heard you scream out to me,
But I couldnt move.
You never saw me standing there,
Just like you didnt see the truck.
You were dead by the time they found you.
They kept asking who you were,
Where were you going.
Things I never knew.
I went to your wake.
You looked so peaceful,
As I kissed you our last kiss.
I watched them lower you in to the ground,
Wishing it was me.
I hated you for leaving,
I hated you for dying.
I love you for loving me.
Tonight I have died for you.
©2005-2009 ~HiddenMindz
:iconhiddenmindz:

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I watch too much tv... either that or I need a therapist.

haha

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:iconcdstudios:
I dont usually do writing so no "Advanced Critique" from me

+fav

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:iconhiddenmindz:
haha thats ok.

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Don't mind me... I am just a random person sent here to take over your mind.
:iconkrystaline:
this is an awesome piece..really a good story line...really emotional and all.I love it +fav

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:iconhiddenmindz:
Thanks alot hun.

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Ill be damned. Son of a bitch fooled me.

[link] < myspace

[link] < hi5
---
Don't mind me... I am just a random person sent here to take over your mind.
:iconkrystaline:
ur welcome

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Live your life as if it is your last, that way, when it is, you have no regrets.

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